Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Taking it further... In that direction...


 I have been revisiting a lot of the things i started writing but eventually abandoned...
Some still resonate, some still seem like a total mystery, some are begging to be re-written...
It's the case of this one... I started it (as indicated by the notes app on my iPad) 76 days ago, but i was reading it today as i was feeling bored during a training session, and i felt i could redo it by extrapolating a recent discussion i had... This is the result...




 Transformation

Because i had to grab a moment
Because you said you were still waiting
For a release to render you potent
Our momentum eventually faded
All that heavy potential
Yielded to a subtle feeling...

But

Sophisticated tendencies
Have emerged to the foreground
If we let them assume our realities,
Does it matter where they take us?
Between the 'within you' and the 'beneath me'
Let's lift things to where they are supposed to be...




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